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Friday 4 November 2016

Persuasive Writing

We have been learning about Persuasive Writing and texts. So we had to try and persuade our principal Mr Moriarty to either Keep the uniform we have, Have no uniform or get a new uniform this is what I have done.

It is time to show true respect to South Hornby School. I think that is time that we show true respect to this School. Three reasons why I think children should have a School uniform are one It shows respect to the school, two people won’t be judging you based on what your wearing , and number three you won’t need to try and look your best.

Firstly, I think children should have a school uniform because it shows  respect. A uniform can show respect by showing the logo to show you are proud to be at South Hornby.  You can also show respect by displaying your badges and your achievements. Just think you could make yourself feel very proud about yourself.

Secondly, I think children should have a School uniform because people won’t be judging you based on what you are wearing. They can’t do that because if you wear something that they don’t like they can’t judge you because, they are wearing the same thing. Also if you wear something that isn't really you they can’t make fun of it. Imagine it will basically be a bully free zone.

Thirdly, I think children should have a School uniform because you don’t need to try and look your best. You don’t need to try and look your best because you are all the same. You don’t have to look your best to try impress anyone. Think it will be just the normal you.

Overall, I think children should have a School uniform because it will show respect, People won’t be judging you, and you don’t have to try look your best. So Mr Moriarty keep the uniform that made memories.

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