A Purrfect Friend For Miss McLeod

Collaborative Success Criteria

• The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
• Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people

The reasons why with supporting ideas

17.10.16  

A Purrfect Friend For Miss McLeod

Did you know that cats can help you get to sleep with the sound of their soothing purr? Just think how that would be a great way to go to sleep! That is why I think Miss McLeod should get a cat  Also, they can a find their way back home and they can look after themselves.

Firstly, Miss McLeod should get a cat because they can help you sleep. Some of the things they can do to help you sleep are, they can help you with their soothing purr by helping you relax. They can also keep you warm with their fur by walking on your bed and rubbing their fur on you. It would be like a silky soft blanket on you, just imagine...

Secondly, Miss McLeod should get a cat because they can find their way back home. This is easy because they can just go outside and find their way back home by them self. They can go far away and find the scent of their owner and come back home. Imagine, they will be your cat for life because if they run away when a earthquake is happening, they will still know where to go to find you!

Finally, I think Miss McLeod should get a cat because they can look after themselves. They can look after themselves by being able to bath themselves. Also if you have a cat flap you don’t have to worry about, having to take them to the toilet. Think about not having to bath your cat every 2 days, and having to open and shut your door constantly.

Overall I think Miss McLeod should get a Cat because they can help you get to sleep, Find their way back home, and look after themselves. Don’t wait Miss Mcleod,  contact your nearest pet shop and get the Purrfect pal for you.